Beijing2008 说:

I dare not to save my English essays in my computer at work because I want to avoid the noticing from others. Since the computer is always opened and anybody can use the files saved inside it is very danger to save personal files in.

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Beijing2008 说:

So I am going to look for something I need after end my job in company.

那你的工作丢了? END也不能用原型.

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Beijing2008 说:

BUT是否定前面讲的,不能单独成句.

My reading and listening skills are at intermediate level (but不合适), however, my writing skills are at beginner level.

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beifeng1995 说:

2007-04-09 sunny
Speaking to “end my job in company” now there is a new offer for me and I have not made my decision yet. Our company is the biggest one in this area in China. I have been working in the same position over ten years so I have much experience on it and I am accepted an expert in the area. The last three years the company raised my salary at every ending of year and sometime there was only me to get the raised salary so now my salary is the highest one in all of engineers, however it is too difficult to get promotion for me since I am a woman and I am nearly forty. You know in our company the salary is like a pyramid. If you stand on the basic level your salary and your bonus are all stand on the basic. My head’s salary is several times to me. Another factor is I often have to work overtime. I have no Saturday. We may have 14 days for vacation every year but no one can get it. In summer we have a whole week’s off to maintain all of the devices. Even in such a period I have to work several days and can hardly get a whole summer holiday.
For the above reason the company reduces a week from our vacation and my colleagues seldom apply the rest days for their vacation if there is no any urgence.
The new offer is completely different. That company is from American and I will be a seller in China. I know the latest standard very well and I am very similar with the devices they made because I had used them for a very long time so the general manager in China invited me to join them. I will always be on business trip if I accept the offer. My daughter is twelve years old. She will graduate from primary school next year so this is a very important period for her. My husband likes a big boy. It seems he can not grow up for ever. Another reason is money. Although the new salary sounds very temping I still have a doubt on it: if it is a salary with tax then I can get thirty thousands to forty thousands extra money. It is not worthy of leaving home.

We will discuss the details of the offer when the manager comes to our city next time. I believe at the beginning of this May I will get the result.

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beifeng1995 说:

intermediate level
beginner level

Now I get it , thank you very much.

This is my very first time to meet the word "intermediate" , hei hei

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beifeng1995 说:

2007-04-09 sunny
Speaking to “end my job in company” now there is a new offer for me and I have not made my decision yet. Our company is the biggest one in this area in China. I have been working in the same position over ten years so I have much experience on it and I am accepted an expert in the area. The last three years the company raised my salary at every ending of year and sometime there was only me to get the raised salary so now my salary is the highest one in all of engineers, however it is too difficult to get promotion for me since I am a woman and I am nearly forty. You know in our company the salary is like a pyramid. If you stand on the basic level your salary and your bonus are all stand on the basic. My head’s salary is several times to me. Another factor is I often have to work overtime. I have no Saturday. We may have 14 days for vacation every year but no one can get it. In summer we have a whole week’s off to maintain all of the devices. Even in such a period I have to work several days and can hardly get a whole summer holiday.
For the above reason the company reduces a week from our vacation and my colleagues seldom apply the rest days for their vacation if there is no any urgence.
The new offer is completely different. That company is from American and I will be a seller in China. I know the latest standard very well and I am very similar with the devices they made because I had used them for a very long time so the general manager in China invited me to join them. I will always be on business trip if I accept the offer. My daughter is twelve years old. She will graduate from primary school next year so this is a very important period for her. My husband likes a big boy. It seems he can not grow up for ever. Another reason is money. Although the new salary sounds very temping I still have a doubt on it: if it is a salary with tax then I can get thirty thousands to forty thousands extra money. It is not worthy of leaving home.

We will discuss the details of the offer when the manager comes to our city next time. I believe at the beginning of this May I will get the result.

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Beijing2008 说:

可在右上方加上姓名,地址电话,如有申请号,加上号码,就和COVER LETTER 一样.

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beifeng1995 说:

I can not save my Enlish essays on my office computer so to avoid other's noticing. Since the computer is always on working and almost everybody can use the files inside it is very dangerous to save personal files on it.

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Beijing2008 说:

我发现一个现象，就是很多ＭＭ喜欢用长句，在写作时，除非你是ＡＤＶＡＮＣＥＤ级水平，否则最好用短句，简明扼要，用词准确，时态一致就行．

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beifeng1995 说:

I am going to look for something I need after finishing my current work.

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Beijing2008 说:

look for 是寻找，确切的词是buy, purchase,不能把中文翻成英文，中文讲“找些我要的东西“，老外就是“买些我要的东西＂

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Beijing2008 说:

简单明了，意思准确．写作不是翻译．如是你的电脑人家能用，老外不解．在国外每人电脑都有密码，自己也有一个小空间，人家不会来看你做什么，要考虑看的人是老外的话，你上面写的让人就费解．用一个字ＡＣＣＥＳＳ替代＂can use the files inside ＂写作时能用一个字就不用词组，和口语不同．

I don't want to save my English essays on the office computer because everybody in the office can access this computer.

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Beijing2008 说:

简单明了，意思准确．写作不是翻译．如是你的电脑人家能用，老外不解．在国外每人电脑都有密码，自己也有一个小空间，人家不会来看你做什么，要考虑看的人是老外的话，你上面写的让人就费解．用一个字ＡＣＣＥＳＳ替代＂can use the files inside ＂写作时能用一个字就不用词组，和口语不同．

I don't want to save my English essays on the office computer because everybody in the office can access this computer.

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zznn123456 说:

Sales is a challenge job and you are often forced to be in an uneasy situation under the high pressure from employer or furious competition from rivals,I have been in this field for more than 10years and I know some rules and regulations to promopt
products in China that not only depend on the quality and price,but also the interpersonal relations whch may play a vital role.

Moreover,the frequent trips perhaps make you mad,I know in such foreign sales branch,there are a few employees in order to save the cost.Sometimes,you may visit the customer by the early morning flight around 6 o'clock and come back by the late night flight,normally go to bed after 12:00 at night,in addition,in the morning at 8:30,your boss is waiting for your report at office.

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beifeng1995 说:

I hope it is a good beginning here.

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Beijing2008 说:

我发现一个现象，就是很多ＭＭ喜欢用长句，在写作时，除非你是ＡＤＶＡＮＣＥＤ级水平，否则最好用短句，简明扼要，用词准确，时态一致就行．

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beifeng1995 说:

I believe that you are very right so I will think it over.

in China that not only depend on the quality and price,but also the interpersonal relations whch may play a vital role.
That is true.

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zznn123456 说:

The title of your new job is Sales Engineer not Seller.

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zznn123456 说:

Good start is a half success.

BZ,is it right?

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zznn123456 说:

Good start is a half success.

BZ,is it right?

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beifeng1995 说:

您说得很对，我是不得已才写长句的：老师说作文要用长句才可以得高分

所以尽管很为难，平常写的时候，还是能长则长

上次的作文是6分，我希望明年再考时，可以得7分

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Beijing2008 说:

CONJUNCTS

Use a semicolon with these words to combine complete sentences.
Use a comma to separate these works in a sentence.

Enumerative: first, second, third . . .; 1, 2, 3, . . .; to begin with; in the first place, in the second place . . .; next, then; finally, to conclude
Reinforcing: also, furthermore, moreover, in addition, above all
Equative: equally, likewise, similarly, in the same way
Summative: in conclusion, to sum up
Apposition: namely, in other words, for example (e.g.), for instance, that is (i.e.), that is to say
Inferential: otherwise, in other words, in that case
Replacive: alternatively, rather, on the other hand
Antithetic: instead, on the contrary, in contrast, by comparison
Concessive: however, nevertheless, still, yet, in any case, at any rate, after all
Result: consequently, hence, therefore, thus, as a result

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Beijing2008 说:

写作一看结构,而看主题,三看支持部分,用例子,数据,引用支持你的观点,用一些TRANSITION WORDS.如再语法拼写没什么错,很容易得7-8分.

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beifeng1995 说:

很容易吗？
我是不是很笨笨

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zznn123456 说:

what a pity for the grandpa! I hope that the operation will be successful and he could recover soon.

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Beijing2008 说:

很多说法了,
A good start is the key to a good finish.
The Right Finish Needs A good Start.
Good Start Is the Secret to Success.

一般老外认为DONE 和SUCCESS不能HALF的.
DONE就是全做好了, SUCCESS就是全实现了.中译英有很多问题的.

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zznn123456 说:

Pls.write in black words,the colors are not good to eyes.

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angelonduty 说:

Will say a prayer for him tonight.

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Beijing2008 说:

CONJUNCTS

Use a semicolon（分号） with these words to combine complete sentences.
Use a comma（逗号） to separate these works in a sentence.

Enumerative（列举）: first, second, third . . .; 1, 2, 3, . . .; to begin with; in the first place, in the second place . . .; next, then; finally, to conclude



Reinforcing（加强，补充）: also, furthermore, moreover, in addition, above all（最重要）



Equative（同样的）: equally, likewise, similarly, in the same way


Summative（总结性的）: in conclusion, to sum up


Apposition（并置，相同）: namely, in other words, for example (e.g.), for instance, that is (i.e.), that is to say


Inferential（推论性的）: otherwise, in other words, in that case


Replacive（替换）: alternatively（二选其一地）, rather（更合适地，宁愿）, on the other hand


Antithetic（相反的，对立的）: instead（代替，改为）, on the contrary, in contrast（相反，大不相同）, by comparison（比较起来）


Concessive（有妥协性的，让步的）: however, nevertheless, still, yet, in any case, at any rate（无论如何，至少）, after all（毕竟）


Result: consequently（从而，因此）, hence（因此，从此）, therefore, thus, as a result

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zznn123456 说:

what a pity for the grandpa! I hope that the operation will be successful and he could recover soon.

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zznn123456 说:

Pls.write in black words,the colors are not good to eyes.

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Beijing2008 说:

Summative（？？？）: 总结性的

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Language of Black: The use of black in familiar phrases can help a designer see how their color of choice might be perceived by others, both the positive and negative aspects.
Good black

Black tie - formal (as in formal party attire)
Black belt - expert (especially in martial arts)
Blackwash - bring things out in the open In the black - having money, doing well in business
Men in black - government agents
Black box - equipment or apparatus
Pitch black - dark as night, very black
Bad black
Black out - Loss of consciouness or the act of erasing something
Blackout - loss of electricity or turning out the lights
Black eye - damage such as damage to one's reputation, slander, unpopular
Black-hearted - evil
Blackguard - a scoundrel
Black sheep - an outcast from a family or from society
Black market - illegal trade (goods or money)
Blackmail - obtaining something by threat
Blacklist - list of people or organizations to boycott, avoid, or punish

Black Words: These words are synonymous with black or represent various shades of the color black.

Ebony, jet, ink, lampblack, coal, soot, charcoal, raven, midnight, obsidian, onyx, sable.

Is Black Your Favorite Color?

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Beijing2008 说:

black > adjective 3MeaningMarked by anger or resentment or hostility.

Examples"black looks"; "black words"

Similar toangry

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beifeng1995 说:

内容绝对多于两节课
受益匪浅

何幸这个论坛有２００８这样的良师

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Beijing2008 说:

Please try it again!

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beifeng1995 说:

We haven’t further news yet about the surgery appointment with the hospital for my grandfather. It is a huge risk to have a surgery for him for he is too old and too weak. However, he must to have a surgery as soon as possible. Otherwise he might have three months to live at most. ​

Now there are six persons looking after him: my husband’s younger brother and his uncle are one shift of night; one of my husband’s cousins and a brother in law are another shift of night; his aunt and his aunt’s husband are the shift of day.
Yesterday my sister’s (in law) daughter, one of the grandfather’s great grandchildren was there too with her parents. She is only four years old. Just a little while her parents were out of the room. The great grandfather asked the girl to loose the bandage around his leg. The little girl climbed to the end of the bed to loose it. Then she got a doubt in her mind if it was right to loose it without doctors’ advice. (Her grandmother told us later.) So she was back to say to her great grandfather: “You must be brave!”​

Now we plan to go there at the weekend.​

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Beijing2008 说:

words in black colour.​

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Beijing2008 说:

We haven’t had further news yet about the a surgery appointment with the hospital for my grandfather. It is a huge risk to have a the surgery for him for he is too old and too weak. However, he must to have a the surgery as soon as possible. Otherwise he might have three months to live at most. ​

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Now there are six persons family members looking after my grandfather. him: my husband’s younger brother and his uncle form the first team. are one shift of night; one of my husband’s cousins and a brother in law combine the second teamare another shift of night; my husband’s his aunt and his aunt’s her husband make the third team. The three teams are mainly resposible for taking care of the old papa at night. are the shift of day. ​

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I am working now and have no time to correct it for you.​

Yesterday, my little niece, the daughter of my sister in law, sister’s (in law) daughter, one of the grandfather’s great grandchildren was there too with her parents. She is only four years old. Just a little while her parents were out of the room. The great grandfather asked the girl to loose the bandage around his leg. The little girl climbed to the end of the bed to loose it. Then she got a doubt in her mind if it was right to loose it without doctors’ advice. (Her grandmother told us later.) So she was back to say to her great grandfather: “You must be brave!”​

Now we plan to go there at the weekend.​

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Beijing2008 说:

Yesterday, my little niece, the daughter of my sister in law, went to see her great grandpa, together with her parents. She is only four years old. Her parents left the room after greeting to their grandpa and then left the little girl staying alone with her great grandpa for a while. The old man lovely looked at the little girl and reluctantly asked her to loose the leg bandage for him. The little girl climbed on to the bed. However, while she was going to do it, she suddenly realized that it was no good without the approval from the doctor. So she stopped and told her great grandpa “ Be brave, no loose without doctor’s approval”.

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Beijing2008 说:

Now there are six family members looking after my grandfather.My husband’s younger brother and his uncle form the first team. One of my husband’s cousins and a brother in law combine the second team. The two teams take care of the old grandpa at night. My husband’s aunt and uncle make the third team. They are resposible for daycare.

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Beijing2008 说:

My husband and I decided to join the family action as the fourth team to take care of our lovely grandpa every weekend.

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Beijing2008 说:

Yesterday, my little niece, the daughter of my sister in law, went to see her great grandpa, together with her parents. She is only four years old. Her parents left the room after greeting to their grandpa and then left the little girl staying alone with her great grandpa for a while. The old man lovely looked at the little girl and reluctantly asked her to loose the leg bandage for him. The little girl climbed on to the bed. However, while she was going to do it, she suddenly realized that it was no good without the approval from the doctor. So she stopped and told her great grandpa “ Be brave, no loose without doctor’s approval”.

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Beijing2008 说:

英文舅舅,姨父,姑父全叫UNCLE.你家亲戚不少啊.冠词我也用不准.一般第一个出现用A, 后面就用THE.

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beifeng1995 说:

钱我前天我就已经准备好了

今晚动身

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beifeng1995 说:

这个记住了

准确说是：记下了

最近我的头脑也象爷爷－－－刚发生的事一会就忘，我是不能象爷爷那么高寿了

呵呵，我的日记一定会坚持写，所以您一定要原谅我：同样的错误我尽量不重犯，但要重犯了，那可不是故意的

２００８老师　有没有感觉　倍受折磨？

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Beijing2008 说:

哦那你们还不在一个城市?

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zznn123456 说:

Eventually my grandpa got his surgery this morning. It took about one and half of an hour. He woke up after a little while. He seemed very well and very excited to talk to each person around him. Everybody was very happy. Doctors said it was a miracle to get such a successful surgery with an old man over ninety years.
He will get well(recover, 是不是更好些?)in a coup of weeks. Although he will sit in a wheelchair we are sure that is better than we used to suppose.

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onlimy 说:

写得真好，只有一个改动，羡慕，学习中

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Beijing2008 说:

Eventually my grandpa got (performed, went through) his surgery this morning.



It took about one and half of an hour one hour and a half.


He woke up after the surgery was finished a little while. He seemed very well and very excited to talk to each person around him. Everybody was very happy.

Doctors said it was a miracle to get(have) such a successful surgery with (for )an old a man over ninety years old.

He will get well(recover, 是不是更好些?)in a coup couple of weeks. Although he will sit in a wheelchair, we are sure that is better than we used to suppose.it is still better than we thought (assumed).

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zznn123456 说:

only呀，那是偶改的 ，
没看见０８老师的批示吗？ ，０８老师和Ｉ老师没来，也不能冷场呀，偶就小心改了一处，是没敢改 ,only 你有几天没updated乐

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beifeng1995 说:

忙忙乱乱的，没有精神写


不过我会尽快更新的－－趁着０８和各位老师还有耐心看，呵呵

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Beijing2008 说:

It took about one and half of an hour( one hour and a half.)
....one and a half hours?

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beifeng1995 说:

Today I served my car. I have to change some parts: a new lamp of left front, a new bugle, a new vent-pipe and so on. Therefore it will be more expensive than normal service.

May is coming. According to the latest news we can get four to five days in the coming holiday. It is the most beautiful season of this city. Firstly Yingchun comes in to bloom. Then Taohua will be in full bloom. Later Dingxiang is coming. I like flowers. I like the city with these flowers. Now I am looking for some information about short journeys around our city.

So far I have not got any further progress on my immigrant application to Canada. I do not know how long it will take me to get the visa. Actually I do not know if I can get the visa in the end. More often I ask myself if I eager to leave my hometown.

In that completely different country what can I do? Can my husband and my daughter adapt to that absolutely new world well? Nobody knows that.

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zznn123456 说:

I like Dingxiang best

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beifeng1995 说:

尤其是香味，用英文实在写不出我的感觉

有天远离这， 可能最想念就是这个季节

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beifeng1995 说:

It is the most beautiful season in this city. Yingchun comes out first ,then Taohua starts to bloom shortly thereafter. Later Dingxiang will get flourishing.

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angelonduty 说:

表示花开的动词有很多,可以写得更灵活些.
指手画脚了点,别介意.

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angelonduty 说:

表示花开的动词有很多,可以写得更灵活些.
指手画脚了点,别介意.

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angelonduty 说:

表示花开的动词有很多,可以写得更灵活些.
指手画脚了点,别介意.

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beifeng1995 说:

这样我的记忆会特别些，会记的深一点

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angelonduty 说:

I learnt a lot from your diary.

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zznn123456 说:

me 2

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beifeng1995 说:

最近好忙好忙----不想节日加班,正在全力赶报告

所以日记要请几天假了

另外我的LISTEN TO THIS 快把初级听完, 节后要进入中级了
还没有进步的感觉,可能每天一两小时,进步太有限吧

不管怎样,要按我的计划进行到底

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zznn123456 说:

listen to this 是啥?

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angelonduty 说:

期待楼主的日记!

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