大家看我写的要求转移文档的信怎么样？哪里要改的提醒一下哈
[font=宋体]主题：[/font]Can you transfer my application to Hongkong?
Dear officer:
You have started processing my case of application for permanent residence in Canada as a federal skilled worker from Aug. 22, 2004. However, after waiting very, very patiently for more than one year, the process status of my application is still 14 on your website of Beijing Embassy, which means ‘still in the queue for assessment’, in other word, you have not begun processing my case at all.
If you were I, could you ever endure with such an endless despairing waiting, waiting and waiting without any suspects for the real reasons for such an absurd and unnecessary retardation? Could you imagine the pain, the suspicion, the great inconvenience your poor efficiency has cast on us? I would not accept such hypothesis that there have been so many applications in 2001, that it had got beyond your capacity to process so many cases in time. Hongkong Consulate deals with more than 15, 000 cases each year, more than twice the number Beijing Embassy gets along with. I would not accept the idea that the visa officers in Beijing be less clever, less hard working, or less efficient than their Hongkong colleagues, either. The only reasonable explanation is that Beijing has much less quota than Hongkong. That is naked race discrimination for Chinese people, but we would have forgiven such a disgraceful insult if ever you had displayed any tittle sign of considerate friendliness. As Beijing Embassy could not, or would not deal with such a great number of applications, you should have declared it immediately on the bulletin of your website, or any other official broadcasting resource to hold back any more applications. Each year, as soon as the maximum number of applications had been reached, you should have announced to refuse any more cases, and we would understand, and appreciate your goodwill. But you have not done so. You still appraise Canada country as well as her government as undreamed heaven for people from undeveloped countries, cheating more and more innocent people into the dirty traps of residence application in Beijing.
But I have still warm affection to Canada people. Nearly 60 years ago, the great international soldier, Dr. Bethune, had fought side by side with Chinese people in the national revolution war against Japanese invaders, and had sacrificed his life. I would like to believe that most Canadian are friendly, fair, and honest to people of Chinese or any other races. I wish you could transfer my application documents to Hongkong Consulate, and I hope my case would get timely treatment there.
Yours sincerely,
眼镜腿
嘿嘿，说实话，我还真不敢直接这么把信发了，大家看看，心里骂他们一顿，过过阿Q瘾也是好的哈
[font=宋体]主题：[/font]Can you transfer my application to Hongkong?
Dear officer:
You have started processing my case of application for permanent residence in Canada as a federal skilled worker from Aug. 22, 2004. However, after waiting very, very patiently for more than one year, the process status of my application is still 14 on your website of Beijing Embassy, which means ‘still in the queue for assessment’, in other word, you have not begun processing my case at all.
If you were I, could you ever endure with such an endless despairing waiting, waiting and waiting without any suspects for the real reasons for such an absurd and unnecessary retardation? Could you imagine the pain, the suspicion, the great inconvenience your poor efficiency has cast on us? I would not accept such hypothesis that there have been so many applications in 2001, that it had got beyond your capacity to process so many cases in time. Hongkong Consulate deals with more than 15, 000 cases each year, more than twice the number Beijing Embassy gets along with. I would not accept the idea that the visa officers in Beijing be less clever, less hard working, or less efficient than their Hongkong colleagues, either. The only reasonable explanation is that Beijing has much less quota than Hongkong. That is naked race discrimination for Chinese people, but we would have forgiven such a disgraceful insult if ever you had displayed any tittle sign of considerate friendliness. As Beijing Embassy could not, or would not deal with such a great number of applications, you should have declared it immediately on the bulletin of your website, or any other official broadcasting resource to hold back any more applications. Each year, as soon as the maximum number of applications had been reached, you should have announced to refuse any more cases, and we would understand, and appreciate your goodwill. But you have not done so. You still appraise Canada country as well as her government as undreamed heaven for people from undeveloped countries, cheating more and more innocent people into the dirty traps of residence application in Beijing.
But I have still warm affection to Canada people. Nearly 60 years ago, the great international soldier, Dr. Bethune, had fought side by side with Chinese people in the national revolution war against Japanese invaders, and had sacrificed his life. I would like to believe that most Canadian are friendly, fair, and honest to people of Chinese or any other races. I wish you could transfer my application documents to Hongkong Consulate, and I hope my case would get timely treatment there.
Yours sincerely,
眼镜腿
嘿嘿，说实话，我还真不敢直接这么把信发了，大家看看，心里骂他们一顿，过过阿Q瘾也是好的哈
各位北京的难友，本来我也打算死守。可是最近听说北京要等4年，与我预期的两年实在是相差太远！我真的受不了了，打算改递香港。这里有谁已经改投了吗？需要什么样的步骤？我打算先给北京使馆发封Email。还有我做了清华认证，不想考雅思。好像HK要求递交时一定要IELTS成绩，清华认证。所以我有3个问题：
