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NEC2-08 The best and the worst
gangnet 2005-11-04 20:59

The best and the worst

Joe Sanders has the most beautiful garden in our town. Nearly everybody
enters for The Nicest Garden Competition" each year. but Joe wins every
time. Bill Frith's garden is larger than Joe's. Bill works harder than
Joe and grows more flowers and vegetables, but Joe's garden is more
interesting. He has made neat paths and has built a wooden bridge over
a pool. I like gardens too, but I do not like hard work. Every year I
enter for the garden competition too, and I always win a little prize
for the worst garden in the town!

Answel these questions in not more than 45 words.
  1. Who has the best garden in town?
  2. What does he win each year?
  3. Who else has a fine garden?
  4. Is Joe's better or not?
  5. Is the writer's garden beautiful, or is it terrible?
  6. What does he always win a prize for?

gangnet 2005-11-04 21:00

2-35

Joe has the best garden in town. He wins 'The Nicest Garden Competition' each year. Bill has a fine garden too. But Joe's garden is better than Bill's. The writer's garden is terrible. He wins a prize for the worst garden. (41 words)

laurence 2005-11-04 21:15

这范文是哪里来的,为什么如此怪异,好似中式英语一般。

小南瓜 2005-11-04 21:20

Joe has the best garden in town so he wins “The Nicest Garden Competition” every time. Bill is also good at gardening. But Joe is better. The writer’s garden is so terrible that he always wins the prize for the worst garden.

42 words,2-30

justin_zhu 2005-11-04 21:23

Really?

小南瓜 2005-11-04 21:23

引用:

作者: laurence
这范文是哪里来的,为什么如此怪异,好似中式英语一般。

It is from New Concept English II.

justin_zhu 2005-11-04 21:25

好象同学们没读学习指导呀,现在是初级阶段,每个问题用1个完整的句子回答,不要卖弄什么复杂句吧

laurence 2005-11-04 21:28

The finest garden in town belongs to Joe, so that he can win the garden competition each year. Although Bill also have a beautiful garden, the garden of Joe is more interesting. I went to the garden competition every year too, but I can only win the prize of the worst garde.

laurence 2005-11-04 21:30

那为什么有许多语法错误?句子之间的关系也不流畅。我从来没学过新概念的,这个是中国人写的吗?
引用:

作者: 小南瓜
It is from New Concept English II.


laurence 2005-11-04 21:31

我觉得复杂句是好的啊,应该鼓励,不能一直用简单句吧。
我支持你小南瓜,该用复杂句就用复杂的
引用:

作者: justin_zhu
好象同学们没读学习指导呀,现在是初级阶段,每个问题用1个完整的句子回答,不要卖弄什么复杂句吧


gangnet 2005-11-04 21:33

引用:

作者: laurence
这范文是哪里来的,为什么如此怪异,好似中式英语一般。

朋友,我已经在这回答你了:http://forum.iask.ca/showpost.php?p=362951&postcount=15

主要目的是为了方便大家练习。不知道实际上也挺好的,知道了反而失去了兴趣。

如果,真想知道,你得保证完成所有的文章,这对你并不困难。

想好了,可以参考这个网址:
http://post.iask.ca/canadameet/topic/30643

gangnet 2005-11-04 21:36

引用:

作者: laurence
那为什么有许多语法错误?句子之间的关系也不流畅。我从来没学过新概念的,这个是中国人写的吗?

此文是本人手工处理,如有错字,敬请指出。

Aim 2005-11-04 21:43

谢谢gangnet,虽然我没有按时交作业.

laurence 2005-11-04 21:44

呀,惹lz生气了,莫气莫气,我只是讲了一点自己的看法,你们继续。

justin_zhu 2005-11-04 21:57

不要认为你水平高得很!嘿嘿,不按要求回答应该给零分,呵呵
引用:

作者: laurence
我觉得复杂句是好的啊,应该鼓励,不能一直用简单句吧。
我支持你小南瓜,该用复杂句就用复杂的


gangnet 2005-11-04 21:57

引用:

作者: laurence
呀,惹lz生气了,莫气莫气,我只是讲了一点自己的看法,你们继续。

怎么会生气。只是我没有用那些icon。用了,你就不会认为我生气了。

justin_zhu 2005-11-04 21:59

It looks like Chinglish
引用:

作者: laurence
The finest garden in town belongs to Joe, so that he can win the garden competition each year. Although Bill also have a beautiful garden, the garden of Joe is more interesting. I went to the garden competition every year too, but I can only win the prize of the worst garde.


laurence 2005-11-04 22:02

当然了,中国人写的嘛,请指正。
引用:

作者: justin_zhu
It looks like Chinglish



小南瓜 2005-11-04 22:35

我不在乎分数的:wdb23: 读了这么多年书还真没在乎过,不然就不会老跟老师较劲了:wdb4: 只是给自己一个练习的机会。有错欢迎大家指正,多谢!:wdb6:

kkk123 2005-11-04 23:49

谢谢Gangnet的辛苦劳作,希望大家共同进步。

fafan 2005-11-06 16:38

引用:

作者: Aim
谢谢gangnet,虽然我没有按时交作业.

Catch you again!haha!

偏偏 2005-11-06 22:21

Joe Sanders has the best garden in town. He wins the Nicest Garden Competition each year. Bill Frith has a fine garden too. But Joe is better. The writer's garden is terrrible. He alway wins a prize for the worst garden.

tina 2005-11-07 19:01

Joe has the best garden in town. He wins ‘The Nicest Garden Competition’ each year. Bill has a fine garden too. Joe’s better than Bill’s. The writer’s garden is terrible. He always wins a prize for the worst garden.

tina 2005-11-07 19:04

3-30

kkk123 2005-11-07 22:33

我来补作业了!

kkk123 2005-11-08 14:57

The Joe Sanders has the best garden in town.He has made patths and has built awooden bridge over apool.the joe wins every time in each year.the Bill Frith has larger than the joe's garden.but the joe's garden in more interesting.
the writer'garden is terrible.He do not like hard work.

gangnet 2005-11-08 15:01

引用:

作者: kkk123
The Joe Sanders has the best garden in town.He has made patths and has built awooden bridge over apool.the joe wins every time in each year.the Bill Frith has larger than the joe's garden.but the joe's garden in more interesting.
the writer'garden is terrible.He do not like hard work.

人名前不使用冠词。
第三人称的复数形式,does。

laurence 2005-11-08 20:46

我的点评
引用:

作者: kkk123
The Joe Sanders has the best garden in town.He has made patths and has built awooden bridge over apool. 现在完成时?以后不作了?the joe wins every time in each year.一年有数次比赛?the Bill Frith has larger what than the joe's garden多余.but大写,but不可放句首 the joe's garden in more interesting 相比较的东西呢.
the writer'garden is terrible.He do not like hard work.

我的建议是要注意时态的选择,还有语法要正确

Irene1201 2005-11-09 01:48

haha.funny

kkk123 2005-11-09 09:57

谢谢Gangnet、Laurence两位老师,从你们这里,我在一点点学习,这两天我在读初中的语法,我在慢慢跟,这样至少可以熟悉课文。谢谢各位的辛苦。

kkk123 2005-11-09 11:20

again:

Joe sandere has the most beautiful Garden in the town.He wins "the Nicest Garden competition"each year.Bill Frith has the fine Garden too.Bill Frith's Garden is larger than Joe's.but Joe's Garden is more interesting.the writer's Garden is terrible.He always wins a little prize for the worst Garden.

kkk123 2005-11-09 11:28

[quote=laurence]我的点评


but大写,but不可放句首。我没看明白,可以再解释一下吗?谢谢!

laurence 2005-11-09 15:02

引用:

作者: kkk123
again:

Joe sandere has the most beautiful Garden in the town.He wins "the Nicest Garden competition"each year.Bill Frith has the用a fine Garden too.Bill Frith's Garden is larger than Joe's.but 句首的单词首字母要大写,另外but这个字不可以放句首,可以用However或者别的转折词Joe's Garden is more interesting than Bill's .t大写he writer's Garden is terrible.He always wins a little prize for the worst Garden.

句首的单词首字母一定大写!如果写比较级的话,more一定than什么东西,口语里面有时省略,但是书面一定要写正确。

pptt 2005-11-10 13:05

Joe Sanders has the best garden in our town. He wins the garden competition every year. Bill firth has a fine garden too,but Joe's better than his. The writer's garden is terrible,so he always wins a little prize for the worst garden.

laurence 2005-11-10 16:43

引用:

作者: pptt
Joe Sanders has the best garden in our town. He wins the garden competition every year. Bill firth has a fine garden too,but Joe's better than his. The writer's garden is terrible,so he always wins a little prize for the worst garden.

bravo! perfect!:wdb10:

justin_zhu 2005-11-28 21:47

Joe Sanders has the most beautiful garden in town. He wins "The Nicest Garden Competition" each year. Bill Frith has also a fine garden, but Joe's is better. The writer's garden is terrible. He always wins a prize for the worst garden. (42words)