个人意见:
1. language you prefer 删掉 Others 后面的N/A
2. 中国 福建省 福州市 福清(镇)(??)融城街道**街*号 邮编:350300
3. Technical Secretary - Main duties
a. Provide techinical information to employer (这不是NOC 里的main duties) 建议删掉
b. Determine related technical procedures 改为Determine and establish technical procedures
c. Set up computer information systems 和 Maintain computers and internal lan 改为 Set up and maintain computer information systems
d. Train other staff in use of current software for technical procedures operation
4. Human Resources Secretary - Main duties
a. Provide general information to the public 没在NOC main duties, 建议删掉
b. Draft human resource reports for director 改为 Compile data, statistics and other information for human resource report
c. 改为Organize meetings and conferences for Human Resource Department
d. Handle wages, benifits, trainings for staff改为 Files all Payroll, HR and Training information
e. Arrange travel schedules 改为 Arrange travel schedules and make reservation